Revision

Revising papers is very difficult for me. When I am writing something I cinvinve myself that it is perfect. I know in my heart that it isn't. This revision project was very difficult, but at the same time, because it was required by the lecture seesion, it was very easy. When there is a mandatory due date for revision I find that I can revisae alot easier. When the process is left up to me, I usually am done with the paper after the first draft.

Barack Rocks

What I noticed most about the speech is how barack rarely used um. Especially in his little anecdote about the Ashley. the girl who worked for his staff. He also was so confident that it would have been really hard not to believe absolutely everything that he had to say.